英语高人请进，这几句如何翻译

岚峰1

1.在模块的基础之上进行舾装、涂装，再将各个分段组装合拢
2.按区域对产品作业任务进行分解与组合，形成船体以分段、舾装以托盘（或单元）作为组织生产的基本作业单元
3.与传统舰船相比，舰船平台不再是围绕某一个设备而进行，而是在一定的标准之下针对一系列的功能模块展开设计
4.每个区域有其特定的功能模块，而且可以方便的更换与其配套的其他模块
5.未来换装模块的重量
6.未来模块换装的可行性因素

menglianglum

看来这可能是您翻译文件时所遇到不会翻译的字句。我通常不敢接这样的翻译。怕闹笑话。

不知最後一句-- “未来模块换装的可行性因素” 是否可以这样翻译：

The feasible factors for replacement of the module in future.

请您指教。

menglianglum

如果您可以接受我所翻的以上这一句，即第6句，那么

请您把第5句翻出来，让大家研究研究。
如果您拒绝我的建议，那么，可能您学习专业英语的进度不会快。

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menglianglum 发表于 2012-3-6 17:05
如果您可以接受我所翻的以上这一句，即第6句，那么

请您把第5句翻出来，让大家研究研究。

i feel what you translated is right basicly

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4.every area has its special functional module,besides it also can change conveniently into another module which is its necessary.
3.comparing with conventional warship,the platform of warship isnot like the past to surround some facility to operate,but expanding design of a series of functional module with the particular criterion.

马银萍

every district has specific  function ,modules ,and they can be replaced easily by the outher matched modules
disassemble and assemble product according to the area ,finalize in hull block and outfitting tray (or unit)as the basic working unit
outfitting and painting on the basis of module (block) then put the blocks together in the process of erection

马银萍

the weight of the replaced module  of   future .

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the weight of  the replaced module in future.
请问这一整句话是什么？没有一整句话导致这个“未来”不好翻译。

395364996

1.  conduct outfitting、coating on the base of the module,and then erect every block.
2. the working missions of products are conducted to divide and fabricate according to the dictrict,and form the block、pallet(unit) as the basic working unit of organizing production of hull、outfitting.

menglianglum

我们说“句子”，但上面那6条不全都是句子。

看来楼主把中文文件翻不出的，成句或不成句的都给端上来。

希望楼主不要以为这样拿到“答案”後拼接起来就成事了。

haoleijun

Beofre module be assembly, all the out-fitting and coating should be reday.