一句话四个人翻译的四种效果，有兴趣来评评

HS_ZHENGZZ · 发表于 2013-10-29 17:58

1，routine assessment, result-based post allocation 生硬，只有中国人才能猜出一点点意思。
2、Annual assessment for job performance and salary adjustment 到这里我的理解是，每年对工作表现和薪水调整的考核，其实是类似第三方监管，确切的说，类似是对薪水调整的审核。
3、The regularly assessment is carried out for college-student employees in the first three years, so as to confirm the appropriate position and salary. (语法词性不通顺。。。)

4、As for the employees, who have graduated from universities/colleges for less than three years, annually assessment for obtaining posts and salary adjustment shall be carried out.
略加改动应该好些，
those employee who gradulate in 3 years, annually assessment should be carried out to them to determite the suitable duty and offer.
请楼上楼下大神们，拍砖。

DONTLOVEME · 发表于 2014-6-7 18:55

本帖最后由 DONTLOVEME 于 2014-6-7 19:00 编辑

这几个好像都没有突出“每年”来，注意“前三年”是修饰毕业生的。

svnjcx · 发表于 2014-6-7 19:49

第二个还可以

menglianglum · 发表于 2014-6-8 20:57

For those employees who graduated from univerties less than 3 years,are subject to an annual assessment for determination of their duty and offer.

sytgos · 发表于 2014-6-12 10:57

performence review yearly for work exprence in three years.

sytgos · 发表于 2014-6-12 10:59

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