龙船6周年征文---- you can never leave.

jackal · 发表于 2012-5-28 13:46

本帖最后由 jackal 于 2012-5-28 13:55 编辑

On a dark and deep night, cool wind in my hair
Unknown smell of shit, rising up through the decks
Up ahead in the distance,
I saw a shimmering light
My head grew heavy and my sight grew dim
I had to take a break for this fucking shafting sighting

There the QC stood beside the gangway.
I seemed to see a ho
And I was thinking to myself, "This could be Heaven or this could be Hell"
Then he switched on the torch and he show me the piano line
There were voices of the workers ‘josh
I thought I heard them say
"Welcome to the XX shipyard"
Such a lovely place, Such a lovely base
Plenty of workshops in this shipyard
Any time of year, you can find it here

His mind is Application-twisted, he got the orders upside.
He got a lot of pretty pretty inspection sheets, that he calls bonus
How they work in this shipyard , hot summer hotdogs.
Some fellas to remember, some assholes to forget
So I called up the Owner’ supervisor, please give me one cigarette.
He said I haven’t smoked since 1996.
And still some dogs are yipping from far away
Wake you up in the middle of the night
Just to hear them yip
Welcome to the Shitbuilding Co.
Such a lovely place， Such a lovely base
They livin' it up at the yard
What a nice surprise, bring all your lives

Stars in the sky, the pink girls running in the mind
And the QC said , we are all just prisoners here , of our own device.
And on the ground after the Tube , we gathered for a smoke.
They started to uninstall the facilities
But they just can’t move it.
Last thing I remember, I was running for the site office
I had to make the paper work for this shitty job that I’ve done so many times before.
'Relax,' said the guard, “ We are programmed to prepare a car for u.
‘Al-rite, thank you’ I smiled.

You can get out any time you like,
But you can never leave!

jasonz · 发表于 2012-5-28 13:54

龙船6周年征文----你永远不能离开。

在一个黑暗的深夜，
凉爽的风在我狗屎hairUnknown的气味，
上升通过decksUp在前面的距离，
我看到了一个微弱的灯光
我的头脑变得沉重，我的视线也变得模糊
我不得不采取这他妈的轴系瞄准的休息

还有的QC站在旁边的gangway.I小号
eemed要看到浩
，我在心里对自己说，“这可能是天堂，这可能是地狱”
然后，他打开火炬，他告诉我的钢琴线
乔希的工人的声音
我想我听到他们的XX shipyardSuch sayWelcome一个可爱的地方，这样的讲习班shipyardAny时间在每年的这个可爱basePlenty，你可以发现这里的“他的心是扭曲的应用，他得到的的订单upside.He了很多相当漂亮的检验表，他呼吁他们在该船厂工作的bonusHow，炎热的夏天hotdogs.Some家伙，记住，一些蛀虫forgetSo我打电话给业主的上司，请给我一cigarette.He说，我已经不吸烟因为1996.And，仍有一些狗睆从远在中间的nightJust awayWake你到一个可爱的地方，这样一个可爱的基础上他们纵情狂欢在yardWhat一个惊喜的Shitbuilding Co.Such听到他们yipWelcome的，的QC说在mindAnd运行的粉红色的女孩带给你生活在天上的星星，我们所有的囚犯在这里，我们自己device.And后管的地面上，我们为smoke.They***开始卸载facilitiesBut他们只是不能移动它。最后一件事我记得，我网站运行officeI的找到通道回到我生长的地方之前，我不得不做出这种低劣的工作，我这样做的纸工作很多次。“放松”，门卫说，“我们安排好了准备一辆车为u。'的仪式，感谢你”我笑了，你可以得到你喜欢的任何时间，但你却永远无法离开！

-----------------------------------
注，感谢google.

jackal · 发表于 2012-5-28 13:56

jasonz 发表于 2012-5-28 13:54
龙船6周年征文----你永远不能离开。

在一个黑暗的深夜，

我艹, 你也手太快了, 我刚才发了之后发现排版一团乱麻, 又重新排了一下.

youngfp · 发表于 2012-5-28 14:08

仔细读了一遍，很有味道！赞
不过，第八句最后一个词语？

似笑非笑 · 发表于 2012-5-28 14:53

表示一句都看不懂..

粪球 · 发表于 2012-5-28 15:47

似笑非笑发表于 2012-5-28 14:53
表示一句都看不懂..

我也是啊只能多看几遍汉语了

jackal · 发表于 2012-5-28 17:26

似笑非笑发表于 2012-5-28 14:53
表示一句都看不懂..

我错了,得空把中文发上来

jackal · 发表于 2012-5-28 18:00

本帖最后由 jackal 于 2012-5-29 01:14 编辑

On a dark and deep night, cool wind in my hair
深更半夜里, 凉风吹面庞.
Unknown smell of shit, rising up through the decks
不知何处shi臭,穿过层层甲板, 袅袅云浮升.
Up ahead in the distance, I saw a shimmering light
抬头望远方，点点有微光
My head grew heavy and my sight grew dim
脑袋愈沉重，视线愈迷茫
I had to take a break for this fucking shafting sighting
我要稍息片刻，为这该死的拉线照光

There the QC stood beside the gangway.
不远QC站在跳板旁,
I seemed to see a ho
我依稀仿佛看见的是豆娘
And I was thinking to myself, "This could be Heaven or this could be Hell"
我心中暗思，“不知道这是地狱还是天堂”
Then he switched on the torch and he show me the piano line
他打开了电筒,让我看那拉线和望光
There were voices of the workers ‘josh
边上有工人说笑的声响
I thought I heard them say
我听见他们在说
Welcome to the XX shipyard
欢迎来到XX船厂
Such a lovely place, Such a lovely base
这可爱的地方,这可爱的船厂
Plenty of workshops in this shipyard
到处都是厂房
Any time of year, you can find it here "
无论何时，你都可以找到这鸟地方.

His mind is Application-twisted, he got the orders upside.
这小子脑袋给报检扭曲了,没办法,都是上头的命令
He got a lot of pretty pretty inspection sheets, that he calls bonus
手里攒了大量的报检单, 他说那都是绩效奖.
How they work in this shipyard , hot summer hotdogs.
在这工作爽不爽, 天干人燥 ,啃啃香肠.
Some fellas to remember, some assholes to forget
有些兄弟应当铭记, 有些混蛋必须遗忘.
So I called up the Owner’ supervisor, please give me one cigarette.
于是我叫了一下船东, 来, 给老子发根醒神棒.
He said I haven’t smoked since 1996.
册那, 他TM说我戒烟已经时间很长了.
And still some dogs are yipping from far away
远处传来了几声犬吠,
Wake you up in the middle of the night
吵得你心神不得安详
Just to hear them yip
那就听它们吠吧.
Welcome to the Shitbuilding Co.
欢迎来到这个造shi厂.
Such a lovely place， Such a lovely base
多么可爱的地方,多么可爱的船厂.
They livin' it up at the yard
他们每天在这里嗨皮地生活
What a nice surprise, bring your lives
多么神奇的地方, 请带着你的躯壳和理想

Stars in the sky, the pink girls running in the mind
天上有点点星光, 脑子里的是粉红女郎.
And the QC said , we are all just prisoners here , of our own device.
QC说, 我们都是一群囚徒, 一群自我放逐的羔羊
And on the ground after the Tube , we gathered for a smoke.
在艉管后面的地上, 我们围着再来一圈烟草共享
They started to uninstall the facilities
工人们已经开始拆卸工装
But they just can’t move it.
但是不知道为啥就是动不顺畅。

Last thing I remember, I was running for the site office
脑中记得的最后一件事,就是跑回了办公室现场。
I had to make the paper work for this shitty job that I’ve done so many times before.
我得把重复过千次的这破事记录,然后存档.
'Relax,' said the guard, “ We are programmed to prepare a car for u.
“不着急.” 门卫说.”我们已经为你准备了回去的车辆.”
‘Al-rite, thank you’ I smiled.
“好的,谢谢你.” 我微微笑，穿好了衣裳。

You can get out any time you like,
只要你想, 随时都可以滚蛋.
but you can never leave!
但你永远无法逃离这个圈子的围场.

whhit76201 · 发表于 2012-5-28 18:06

好搞啊

我是一只鱼 · 发表于 2012-5-28 20:55

看看。 {:3_47:}

jackal · 发表于 2012-5-29 01:18

youngfp 发表于 2012-5-28 14:08
仔细读了一遍，很有味道！赞
不过，第八句最后一个词语？

Ho=whore

船已靠港 · 发表于 2012-5-29 10:23

jackal 发表于 2012-5-28 18:00
On a dark and deep night, cool wind in my hair
深更半夜里, 凉风吹面庞.
Unknown smell of shit, risi ...

前几天有个在龙船到处找编剧啥的伙计，我让他找你去，也不知道真找你了没？

断线风筝 · 发表于 2012-5-29 10:26

这篇文章看样子必中奖无疑啊……

jasonz · 发表于 2012-5-29 10:27

jackal 发表于 2012-5-29 01:18
Ho=whore

这个=，才让我明白。。。。。。{:3_47:}

dredgingirl · 发表于 2012-6-5 11:37

这不是老鹰乐队的加州旅馆么？

115811336 · 发表于 2012-6-5 11:48

魅力一族

chenxy · 发表于 2012-6-8 08:51

先看英文，发现自己理解有点乱。
看了LZ的中文，诗意融融。LZ你太有才了。。。顶一个。

玩狙的 · 发表于 2012-6-8 11:28

貌似可以做歌词？

玩狙的 · 发表于 2012-6-8 11:29

呼唤高手做成歌，放出来

395364996 · 发表于 2012-6-12 00:40

suggest you checking this paragraph again，写的不错的

龙船6周年征文---- you can never leave.

评分

评分